✉️ IELTS Writing Task 1 – General Training (편지)
📮 문제:
You recently attended a business seminar in another city and left a folder with important documents behind.
Write a letter to the organizer of the seminar and say:
- When and where the seminar took place
- Describe the folder and its contents
- Ask if they could send it back to you
🧾 작성 팁:
- 150단어 이상
- 형식: Formal letter (공식적인 톤)
- 구성:
- 인사말 (Dear Sir or Madam,)
- 도입 → 본문 (3포인트 커버) → 마무리
- 끝맺음 (Yours sincerely, + 이름)
Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope this message finds you well. My name is NAME, and I was one of the attendees at the company seminar held on June 19th. I am writing to ask for your assistance regarding an item I left behind.
Unfortunately, I left my brown briefcase on the table where I was seated—third row from the stage, on the right side of the hall. The bag may have been mistaken for someone else’s, as many participants carried similarly designed bags. I am particularly concerned because the briefcase contains a list of my clients and their personal information.
Could you please check the event hall and let me know if it was found? I would greatly appreciate your help in recovering it. Thank you in advance for your cooperation, and I apologize for any inconvenience caused.
Yours sincerely,
Name
📝 IELTS Writing Task 2 문제 (의견형)
Some people think that it is more important to spend public money on promoting healthy lifestyles in order to prevent illness than to spend it on the treatment of people who are already ill.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that public money should be used to promote healthier lifestyles and prevent illness, rather than focusing on treating people who are already sick.
However, I disagree with this view, and I believe that investing in medical treatment is equally, if not more, important.
In this essay, I will explain the reasons for my opinion.
Body Paragraph 1:
Firstly, people who are already ill require immediate public assistance, more urgently than healthy individuals.
It is well known that people with health problems often struggle to find stable, full-time employment.
Without regular income, they may not be able to afford expensive medical services.
As a result, many patients are left untreated, and their conditions may worsen, leading to more severe health and financial consequences.
Body Paragraph 2:
Secondly, the use of public funds should be justified by clear and measurable outcomes.
Since national budgets are always limited, it makes sense to prioritize those who are in greatest need.
Healthy people can often maintain their condition through simple actions like exercising or regular self-checkups, which are relatively low-cost.
If public money is spent on them unnecessarily, it may lead to little or no visible benefit to society.
Therefore, resources should be directed toward helping those who are already suffering.
✅ 마무리 문장 정리 (Conclusion)
For these reasons, I strongly believe that public funds should primarily be allocated to treating those who are already ill.
💡 유용 표현 정리
cannot afford to pay | 비용을 감당할 수 없다 |
public assistance | 공공 지원 |
measurable outcomes | 측정 가능한 결과 |
justify the use of funds | 예산 사용의 정당성 증명 |
those in greatest need | 가장 필요로 하는 사람들 |
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